Friday, 11 April 2014

My Goal was...

To create complex sentences by adding commas.

I have used this sample because i think that i have used good use of commas.

One day a girl called Kelly went on a cruise it was the best day of her life,but as she got further and further out to sea she could see dark clouds coming there way a storm was coming she thought she tried to get inside but all the doors were shut and locked.

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