Thursday, 3 July 2014

Who has more responsibility buisnesses or consumers.

My writing goal at the moment is to use punctuation correctly in my writting.
I will show you one of my paragraphs of my writing that show my punctuation.

Lately people have been arguing about who has more responsibility :buisnesses or consumers(customers). Do :buisnesses or consumers. Do buisnesses have more responsibility providing all the products? Or,do the consumers have more responsibility trying to find a good product that they can keep safe?

This peice of writting shows that i can use punctuation in the right place.
I believe that I am at relational because, I need to seek feedback from others.
My next step is to get to extended abstract.