Writing Using Our Senses

What:   WALT  use our senses (hearing,smell,touch,taste and

So What:I  learnt to use lot of punctuation in my writing                                                                                                                                          

Now What my next step is to do my writing faster and describe better

I could see all the shimmering splashing waves with all the white sand all around me.And all the mini squishy blue jelly fish.I hear all the big fat seagulls  all around.I smell  all the salty sea all around me it was horrible and all the fishy fish smells.I feel all the nice sand  sticking to me after a great swim.