My good learner goal

My good learner goal for the past three weeks has been to give good and helpful feedback to others in the class.

I think that i have improved on this goal because my first piece of  feedback this year wasn't very helpful, so since then i have made sure that have given good and helpful feedback.The thing that i have found most challenging is to give them a next step.My next step would be to give better next steps.

Tamaras ukelele

 At the moment  hink that i can play ten guitars because i think that it sounds quite good and i have improved it by getting in tune more than when i had started.My next step is to remember to look at the cords.

A paragraph from my argument

This is a paragraph of my argument about the New Zealand flag being changed.
This writing shows the connectives this paragraph.
For example I used personally and I think.

I can understand why people want the New Zealand flag changed but personally I think that that it should stay the same it may look a bit like Australia but that doesn't matter because it's a New Zealand flag.If the New Zealand flag gets changed it would just be a waste of time,and because some people do want he flag changed there should be a vote on who wants the flag changed and who wants it to stay the same.