A paragraph from my argument

This is a paragraph of my argument about the New Zealand flag being changed.
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For example I used personally and I think.

I can understand why people want the New Zealand flag changed but personally I think that that it should stay the same it may look a bit like Australia but that doesn't matter because it's a New Zealand flag.If the New Zealand flag gets changed it would just be a waste of time,and because some people do want he flag changed there should be a vote on who wants the flag changed and who wants it to stay the same.